Show Not Tell.

I was sweating, the drips falling down my face as if it was raining. I felt like I was in a BBQ    being sizzled like a steak. The temperature was so high that my skin was starting to peel off slowly also getting boiled up from the steaming sun. Steaming like a train running on the track every hour every second of the day. Can’t stand the heat I could  just dip my body into freezing water.