Nervously waiting on the cold hard concrete, I challenged myself to beat my mates at today's Cross Country. As I was sitting on the freezing court watching the races, I could feel whistling wind blowing against my face. Huffing and puffing, I was going to complete today's hard race. Crossing the finish line, I felt very dizzy and tired, but I was proud because I had won!.
2 comments:
Hi Samuela,
I love the clever vocab you have used to make your sentences in you little paragraph sound very expressive. Good luck for next year. Keep up the good work.
From Makerita
Hi Samuela, I am a student in Dr. Strang's class at the University of South Alabama in Mobile, Alabama. I think your descriptive way of describing things is excellent! "the cold hard concrete" is a great example of all the description you gave. Congratulations on winning! I am sure you are very proud of yourself and you deserve to be! I hope you win again next year! :D
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