2013 Writing Test.

This morning we all completed our first Writing sample for 2013. I have posted it just as I wrote it in the 40 minutes that we were given, so that throughout this year I will be able to look back and reflect on the progress I have made in my Writing. I will post me learning goals from this soon.

Title: The Lost Lunch Box..

One rainy morning Sarah and Dan were going to make their debut at a primary school called Beach Bay Primary, not far from where they had lived. Arriving at the school Dan said “I am so keen to start as a new entrance to meet and make good friendship with others”, then Sarah replied “Oh that's wonderful Dan, I’m so looking forward for this new school too. I’m sure will have a great and fun year !”, “You bet” said Dan.

Kisses on both cheeks of Sarah and Dan's mother, Rachel as she was yelling from great distance “HAVE A GREAT DAY” ! to Sarah and Dan as they were heading towards the front gate. As quickly as they could, Dan and Sarah was sprinting as if they were competing in a 100 meter run, running to see their new school.

During school Dan and Sarah were having a fabulous time meeting new people and making good friendship. As soon as the bell rang for interval, Dan and Sarah went out to the hall way to get their morning tea. As Sarah opened her bag she noticed that something was gone missing, it was her lunch box. She asked Dan “Dan have you seen my lunch box ?” Dan replied “no, whys that ?” Then Sarah spoke up in a very firmly toned voice “Because its gone missing !” Suddenly Dan was filled up with such anger when Sarah said her lunch box was missing.

It was a huge problem for Sarah because from now and then she had nothing to eat. Then Dan asked the teacher if she saw a pink lunch box, then the teacher “Sorry Dan no I haven’t seen a pink lunch box but I’ll help you get some lunch for Sarah to eat until we find her lunch box”. So the teacher Miss Helen went to the office and asked for a chicken roll and a milkshake for Sarah.

Sarah was pleased and happy eating her morning from Miss Helen. “Thank you !” Miss Helen as Dan and Sarah said to Miss Helen in a thankful voice. It “OK !” replied Miss Helen.

Math - Great At...

 I hope you enjoy my little presentation about what find easy on Math Whizz.

Touch.

Doing touch drills was really fun, learning the skills of touch. One of the drills was one group defend and the other attack, and I was on the defending side. Running as fast as I could huffing and puffing, trying to defend the opposition as hard heavy sweat dripping down my face.
Sweat dripping down towards my eyes as I couldn’t barely see to what was happening but I managed to get there. Collapsing on the floor as I was so exhausted after that challenging drill.

Bio Poem.

Samuela.
Lover of my family, sports and food.
Who feels excited when playing sports, hearing funny jokes and kicking back with mates.
Who has been to Tonga and Australia.
Who needs to play sport every day with friends.
Who fears Sharks, crab sized spiders and snakes.
Who would someday like to go explore the White House in America with Barrack Obama.
Who could've met Biggie smalls, Tupac and Michael Jackson.
Who dreams of staying in 50 cent house with the G- Unit clan and being a rugby superstar.
Who values my family, friends and mates.
Resident Of Panmure.
Samuela Fonua.

I am Presentation.

As you can see this is a little presentation about my self and some interesting facts. Hope you enjoy it !!.

NRL All Star Against The NRL Indigenous Side.

Both teams, NRL All star and the NRL Indigenous getting ready to give it their best in front of millions of fans, playing in Suncorp Stadium in Sydney. It was an important game for both teams
because they were playing in front of their fans, so they wanted to impress them. It was also a clash between the coaches of both teams, Wayne Bennett of the All Star team and Craig Bellamy from the Indigenous side.

The All Star team is represented by the 16 clubs in the NRL tournament. They are called the All Star team because they pick very talented players from each team in the 16 teams. The Indigenous side represent the Aboriginals, which some players from the 16 teams are picked from, that are Aboriginals.

Kiwi Skipper Benji Marshall leading out the All Star team and Skipper Jonathan Thurston also leading his side the Indigenous. As the Indigenous side were coming out of the dark tunnel, fans screaming for their favourite team. While they were running out, NRL hall of fame Preston Campbell hosting the Indigenous side as he was playing the Didgeridoo.

Getting ready for kick off, five eighth benji marshall kicking the ball for the Indigenous side to receive the ball.

The game went on very well until the danger man, Ben Barber from the Indigenous side scored a hat trick in the first half.

In the second half the Indigenous side were on fire scoring another 4 tries, making the Indigenous side way ahead of the NRL all star. With 20 minutes left of the game the NRL all star scored a try leaving the final score of all stars with 6 points and the Indigenous side with 32 points, WHAT HIDING !!!.

All Star vs Indigenous Highlights.

My Goals For 2013.

This year, 2013, my goals are to improve in my writing, maths and reading. My new class teachers are Mr Bark and Mrs Nua. Mr Barks is really good at maths, and Mrs Nua is really good at reading and writing, so I am quiet happy with my new class for 2013.

To achieve my goals I would have to keep on task, concentrate and listen to what my teacher, Mr Barks and Mrs Nua tells me to do and also use the time effectively that I am given.

My goals in writing is to write at least 4 to 5 paragraphs as a year 8 student at Pt England School. Another goal for me in writing is to use punctuation in my writing, also use very good vocabulary to make my writing sound interesting and to hook my audience in. I know for me writing is the most hardest subject in school, but I’m going to give it my best effort.